Untitled Disappointment

I don't understand you

I can't desipher what you're saying.

Your words slur

Into one another.

 

I never knew

I would be the reason

For your disappointment.

I am truly crushed

And I don't want to live.

I have let you and everyone down.

Even myself.

This mental pain is getting to be

Too much.

I don't think

I can take much more of it.

 

The thought of cutting

Has come back to haunt me.

How much more

Until I break?

Because of the stress

I can't help but crave it so dearly.

The splitting jolt of pain

Is what I need.

Reviews

[x]

If you think your way into a situation, then surely you can think your way out of it.....just going on the mental pain thing you mentioned there.

[Pomegranate]

I relate to this.
Very powerful, well worded/crafted.
The only thing I would change is
"I don't think
I could take much more of it"

I would change 'could' to 'can', but that is just my opinion.

[clauds294]

Wow this is very powerful also, I can relate to this piece.