Anymore

This is made up. I just wrote it cause it's what I was thinking and the lines just kept flowing in my head. They wouldn't leave until I wrote them down.

I never thought

I could hate him.

He thought I was everything

Until he went back to his old ways.

I didn't believe

My heart would do this to me.

I loved him deeply and so dearly

That I could never turn my back.

But now I must

And it hurts my soul.

But what's done is done

And the pain is gone.

Because I don't see him

Anymore.

Reviews

[Hello, Goodbye]

good job

[r]

nice job!

[Silere]

Powerful imagination you have. Emotions are what drive us.. and you show yours very well in your words that you chose. It was Very well written. Thank you for sharing! Keep writing!

[Wicahpi]

sounds like a girl with experience...
good one.