A Certain Lover

A Certain Lover

A Poem by I Am Svetlana

I want a lover

That no one can see.

Only my eyes can site him.

He must be a perfect gentlemen.

Great to the parents and adorably polite.

He would raise no hand at me

And he would talk out his problems.

Anger and hate are not in his veins

Only love and comfort.

His heart is the flame

To the fire that keeps me warm.

And I know he would never

Leave me.

© 2010 I Am Svetlana


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I liked this poem. I really liked it. I want a lover like that too. My exs all treated me right. Though my fourth one abused me mentally. I liked this though. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


I liked this one, because just like you and almost the rest of the female population, I want this guy, too! Nicely written and from the heart.

Posted 15 Years Ago


but you will get one...and about the bathroom seat...well,one can manage if he doesn't leave...cant one

Posted 15 Years Ago


He would never leave because he doesn't exist! lol no but really, this is def a girl's fantasy check list of a mate. U forgot, "and he always leaves the bathroom seat down for me"...

Posted 15 Years Ago



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I Am Svetlana
I Am Svetlana

Madison, WI



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