Taking Glory

They laugh at me

I flash them a smile.

For we both know who was right

In this case.

I smile because

I have proved them wrong.

They laugh because

They think they have won the battle.

For they don't know

I have ways to sneak around

And snatch the win.

This win is mine

And I take your glory.

Reviews

[Kelso]

i like this. it's really good

[PoeT4994]

Another short one, another basic one, another pure one, another great 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I liked it.

[Joe]

I really like this poem. you have a great rhythm and word choice. Great job! Keep it up!

[Senseless whatever]

Very nice. 'sneak around and snatch the win' I love this line. And with this poem, the glory is yours.

[Avoiry]

I love the sly slinky feel of this piece. It is almost serpentine. I like the expression of a smile it almost seems conniving especially as you speak of giving a false sense of security to your opponent. Nice flow love the feel . Keep writing !