Who We Are

These are our errors

Which we must fix soon.

We will regret it

If we don't.

Going alone would be best.

Trust no one

Is your motto.

That soon

Everyone would follow.

This is who we are.

 

Reviews

[PoeT4994]

Like it, you have short and to the point 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.....................................................................................................................................overall I liked it.

[Lucia Morgan]

i really loved reading this, i think its a very deep representation of how messed up our society is, how we trust noone, continuing to live in a pool of lonelyness and the masses sick habit of denying their individuality by "following" was is deemed appropriate or popular. i found it very original and insightful.

[Elissa; the genuine art..]

This nearly reminds me of a gang mentality. [you most likely did not intend for it to be interpreted that way but that's the beauty of art everyone will see something different]
I'm not sure why.
It just hit me like "Do the job right & trust no one".
I like it, a lot actually.
Great write!
-Elissa :)

[Emily B]

It is almost never best to go alone. Trusting, like loving, is learned. And sometimes must be re-learned. We learn. We grow. We continually re-become who we are.

Somewhere in here there is a little spark of something resembling hope. It is small but one day will grow larger.

[Buddhistboy73]

This for me is a very bold poem, and seems to indicate taking responsibility for our lives, so that we can then live without regrets. I love the premise of this, and it really connects with the buddhist view of life too. It has actually encouraged me to take a hard look at myself and see what i would like to change for the better. Yeah, i really enjoyed this piece.....

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I read this poem a few times. It made me think that we should take a look at ourselves and critique our lives. That kind of self evaluation should be honest and that means that we should not contaminate our efforts with the influences of others. This poem also gave me the idea that maybe if we all be the best person we can be, the world would seem to automatically fix its self. When I look at the influence the individual has on the world around them...it seems that we cant bring others to repair the damage we've done to others. Perhaps it underminds everything we attempt to do. This poem has a lot to say. It has ideas on many different levels. That is what I consider a huge achievement. Nice work.