My Sorrow

My sorrow has brought me

Nothing but tears.

The tears don't dare stop.

My sorrow has buried me

Deep into the soil.

No one has bothered

To uncover me.

My emotions have broken me

Down to the core.

I haven't been revived

Of this sorrow.

It is

What still haunts me.

Reviews

[Juan]

Although this may have a melacholy theme I cant help but love the incapacitational emotion that runs throughout the poem. Like an opera it almost has an leitmotif feel to it, a very heartfelt rhythmic tone indeed.

[Jordan]

Your sorrow shouldn't haunt you for there is much joy to be had in life and in simple things. The poem is full of pain and breaks the heart to read because it feels like you are desiring just to be brought back to life. The poem was wonderful to read and written amazingly. A pleasure to read.

[there is no more from m..]

I like this poem well done

[Scissorhandds4eva<3]

I love this.

[Sheila Kline]

Dear One!
When your sorrow haunts you.....bid it to leave! Seek the sunshine and leave the dark of life behind as you walk in the light of love. Many of us who are shadowed o'er by dreariness must make a conscious effort to "work" at sending the sadness away! Try one smile, have one thought of good times, of a memory that sticks in your mind, and then hold onto it!......see it, feel it, taste it, let it enter you and settle over one part of the sorrow.

You say.....The tears don't dare stop......Why? Ask yourself this. Why can't they stop? You may try to uncover you if no one else has. You have worth! You are special! You are only YOU! No one else in the world has your talents, your heart, your spirit....embrace it! Let it blossom and walk away from the tears.

Build yourself up, if it is just one thought at a time!!!

Hugs, Sheila