I Want You Here

Here

Is where I want you to be.

Next to me.

Holding me close

As we lay under the stars.

You are me.

I am you.

We are one.

My dreams are of you.

About us.

We are true

Romeo and Juliet.

Reviews

[Jacqueline Lopez]

That's adorable. Cute!

[Happy Cereal]

Sweet little poem, I love the significance of the end line, very clever! Great rhyme scheme too! Lovely :)

[Ian]

Ahh this is a nice love poem it shows no frustation just peace.

[cheeeeese]

Short, but memorable and so touching and heartwarming. I loved every bit of it. And I love the ending. I just recently had to read Romeo and Juliet in lit class. I thought it was just going to be another book I didn't want to read, but oh was I wrong. (I'm getting the dvd of Romeo and Juliet now because I love it so much XD) [sorry for my rambling... :P] 100%

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[Aislinn Gryffin ((Ashes..]

Beautiful poem. =] i hope the end of the story isn't like Romeo and Juliet.

[Deaths Cold Kiss]

i love this poem its so beautiful

[LoveAndDreams]

Wow!
That's amazing, I was actually going to do one of Romeo and Juliette because they are just so classic and this is their story, how they wanted to be as one no matter what
:)

[shinybluestars03]

Great short poem
Its an amazing feeling when you have
ur partner close to you and you feel so
engaged with them.
Thanks for sharing

Best wishes

[JustWantLove]

Perfect!