Crowded Mind With You

Crowded Mind With You

A Poem by I Am Svetlana

You are so special.

I can't even describe

These new emotions coming over me.

You crowd my mind

Every minute of the day.

When people ask what's on my mind

I immediately say your name.

It may be weird to others

But I honestly don't care.

I love you

And I hope you believe me.

© 2010 I Am Svetlana


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peace and light

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Honest and refreshing

Posted 14 Years Ago


i love this so much. story of my life right now ha

Posted 14 Years Ago


i believe every word of it ,love

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is one of the most beautiful poems I've ever read.
I hate to give such a lousy review...but it really got to
me. Nice job. 100 (+1)

Posted 14 Years Ago


liked this piece. you write with emotion..."you crowd my mind"....and the daring of saying "i hope you believe me".....thank you! great work!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Doesn't ever matter what other people think;
only what your heart speaks...

Peace n Light

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on January 21, 2010
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I Am Svetlana
I Am Svetlana

Madison, WI



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"If you cannot write well; you cannot think well; if you cannot think well, other's will do your thinking for you." -Oscar Wilde Hello all, my name is Emily Svetlana! I am 30 years old and wo.. more..

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