Dizzy Feeling

My life

Is falling to pieces.

And so am I.

I can't think straight

And I feel dizzy.

Needing to lay down

I stumble towards my bed.

My vision is blurry

I can't see much.

I feel myself falling

And need someone to catch me.

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[Heavyhearted]

it's so weird, the feeling of letting go. slipping into sleep, a coma, or any kind of leap of faith. you think you are able to handle something but it falls apart, and strangely you don't feel the stress anymore and you are not moved by the destruction of what you were working on, you just let go. and you are somewhat releaved of the responsibility you had.
but it's not always that pleasant. sometimes you give in because you cant take any more, and you pray that there will be someone to catch you when you do fall and can no longer hold on.

my vision is blurry
i can't see much.

my favorite part, the vulnerability.

[safeuncertainty]

i love the last two lines :) very relatable

[Duolon]

You are a sweetheart. In the grasp of nothingness and infinty we breathe...
Just breathe...
Its you you seek after, inside of you, you seek to see you. But reality is a lie.
Ive seen it defy gravity, turn wisdom into insanity, and peel back the layers of my own sanctity. Its a disgrace the steps we take. To awaken to the state that all is grace is to replace the victim with the victor, and the villian with the vibrant.
I cant tear apart the chains wrapped around the earth, but I have tried.
And sometimes I think the chains are meerly ornaments. Decadent testaments to the fact that we can endure so much, overcome so much, become so much.
What lurks in the minds wandering as you say dizzy from the fact that were spinning at thousands of miles and hour, zipping around the sun a hundred times faster than that, surounded by dead planets, freindless, alone, in a galaxy that is shaped like blades, one of millions floating somehow in infinite space. And it takes soo much to just feel that touch that youre really alive. Why is there a cloud of massive objects spanning billions of light years accross sitting in the mind of time. And why wont it ever speak to us. Love is all we have to keep us awake to the fact that we were even made for a purpose. So I wish you all the love that infinity contains. and though prayers go unanswered. I will say, Its ok to feel unbalanced sometimes. Yin and Yang, shifts from light to dark. The heart rips and mends itself. And Hell? never consider it. Though they spit in your face, make it a state of mind to remind yourself you can live inside. Like youve inscribed, be unseen, even to yourself. Notice not the death and hell. Though it dwells heavily. Readily call on the love that I so truly and deeply see within you.
You are a Queen of infinity, You have no beginning, for something cannot come from nothing. Be the person you want to be. And dream, dream of whatever keeps your heart at peace. And dont let anybody takethat from you.
You are the truest love. And also please find someone to tell you this is true.
Find that someone who can see you, and love you for it.

[The Wave]

wow

great imagery. .love how just describing every little detail in this way made the emotion strong and come through...
good job.

[Senseless whatever]

Blunt and to the point, feelings well implied.

[nunldon]

Hi Ash,
Some songs come to mind after reading this; Patcy Kline for one.
I certainly know that feeling; "oh please, just let me make it to the bed".
I like your sentiment here; poetic.

[Isolophobe]

Very concise and honest. Less of a request for something, more of a plea for it.