Everything Right

I feel alone

But I know you are here.

Here to protect me

From the danger that haunts

My night.

For I am like you.

We like the same things.

I am not afraid

To say "I love you"

Because I know

All the right feelings are there.

 

Reviews

[Duolon]

Whoever youre talking about is lucky.

[Hoshi Nami]

really well done! short, passionate and emotional poems like these are my favorite. it's so much more raw when there is less to digest.

[chloe cruz]

So beautiful and heart-wrenching... I loved it so much. Whoever it was about really is lucky to have your love, hehe. I can relate to this so well, it's amazing how much it affected me, the feelings bursting through, inside me.

Chloe.

[Senseless whatever]

One of your best ones yet in my opinion, I have only read a handful though. But very very good.

[Pomegranate]

(Oh how I relate to this)
Beautiful, beautiful words!
Reading this made me genuinly happy, good job.

[JustWantLove]

Beautiful!!!