You Don't Care

It's clear to see

That you care for no one.

Only yourself.

You are your own best friend.

You don't need me.

It's more than obvious

You don't give a damn

About me, my feelings.

I pour out my heart

And you feel free to stomp on it.

Now my heart is broken

Because of you.

Reviews

[AbsentElements]

I can only help but think of one song...

"Dear Agony, Just let go of me, Suffer slowly, Is this the way it's gotta be, Dear Agony." Dear Agony- Breaking Benjamin.

Some people don't understand how much you put out for them. And the few who do, take it for granted.

[So Sick of Love]

i love it. its sad how some people can only care about themselfs and not how the person who loves them feels

[grace]

alot of emotion I like that

[Duolon]

Ahh the blind soul suckers. "butter my bread he said" . "But I have no butter"
"So walk to the store and get some!!!" In the dumb moments while you were gone out doing his biddings. He was spitting on the moon, to swoon the consuming blessings of death. Since he had nothing left, when you came back out of breath, he said no, I think Id rather have you dead, I like tragedy more than butter. And so the lover is really just a hunter, seeking fond imageries of his own pervetedly doomed destiny. Black holes in hearts, imploded stars from the gravity of depravity and chaos lurking beyond infinities walls, make us all feel small. Thats why they always say find Church boys, though church toys with the same spitted image of death and distaste for this place (in our hearts) we have made our home. Devils roam the earth, and not the biblical kind. The ones that cant decide between bread and butter or death and dying.
Be strong Child of the beginningless beginning. Daughter wrapped in infinity.
For earth is an ignorant design.

[TearsDontCompute]

when you read this, you think of someone...great job. keep us thinking :)

[Ferg]

the realization that someone we love doesn't care as much back is devastating and you have captured that well in your words

[Life is A"Musing"]

It is very heart breaking to know the one you care for doesn't truly feel the words {which are strong}, written or spoken. Time shows who real friends are and what life's truth really is. Hang in there, there is someone out there that will treat you with honesty, respect and love. :D

[Ian]

Wow thats sad now you know who your real friends are and who's not

[H]

Broken hearts, so sad and painful. You spoke with honesty and sorrow. Keep writing, the word will mend the pieces

[Mukeshkumar Mafatlal Ra..]

Broken hearts become more stronger.............bring out the agony of your heart not directly but........,sorry..dear....