Invisible Soul

I don't know me

No one else does either.

I stay clear and invisible

To humans.

Demons accept me

Into their pacts and cults.

They tell me to do their duties.

But I don't.

All because I cannot be seen.

By any of them.

Living or dead.

I am that invisible soul

People wish to see.

Only they don't.

Reviews

[Raven Wilson]

I like the compact way this is written, it really brings meaning into each line.

[Duolon]

And isnt the unseen so free from ridicule, free from the cesspools of human frail opinion and demon glazed vision. To be unused by others is a gift. As the hits and slanders of a fallen race take the soul to places deep in hate, making you like them, making you one of them. Demons wish for children to listen, everyone does, even me. So being unseen you are free. Not to be judged by anybody.
Thanks for the beautiful advice. And an excellent write.

[Ferg]

i have felt this invisible-ness that you speak of......nicely written. i will echo danny's words below........you are the one with the power to make yourself visible! you need to tap into those qualities which make you shine!

[Danny J.H.]

find strength in yourself, or else no one can

[Wicahpi]

there are times I still feel invisible and I'm used to that;
sometimes even thrive in its security. good job!