World's End

I don't know

Why the world turns and I

Don't turn along with it.

I just stand there

In the cold, open air.

The world passes by

But I am not moving.

I am stationary.

Hoping for someone

To come and save me.

Before the world ends

For all of us.

 

Reviews

[Ferg]

excellent writing once again......you capture the solitude well.

[Wicahpi]

step one foot in front of the other and start moving, slowly...
get your feet wet. this is a fine write of solitude.

kudos

[nunldon]

Very nice and well written piece with a couple of sentiments; the world is passing me by and it's going to end.

[angelina neves]

lovely!
- But, in my opinion: even if you stand still, you are revolving with the all world! And don't wait any more! There is no one to come and save us if we don't "save" ourselves!

[Undying Glory]

great poem. i like the theme you chose, it's freaking interesting. excellent work

[JustWantLove]

In terms of plain: it's wonderful!