Why I'm Here

I am here

Because I have potential.

I have scars to prove my disappointment

To many people.

I should've stopped after the first scar,

But didn't.

I am here

To prove I am strong to others.

I can stand my ground

Against evil forces.

I am here

Because I deserve to be.

Reviews

[Mizuki Tsukiakari]

Wow. The last two lines really made me think. It's amazing! ;p

[MK and MF]

I can totally relate to this one! the only difference between you and me is that you somehow put it into words!

[MK and MF]

love it.

[JC]

you write with such honesty I can't help but be a fan.

[nunldon]

You go girl!

[Apparition]

thanks for the inspiration, time to go write

[Apathy To Empathy]

Deserving, and willing!! Your writing is always unique, and in this case, strong hearted, determined, and straight forward. It lets me know, that I have scars to prove to myself that I was slipping, but I have scars to let everyone see i'm reaching out, and that it's not just a "pity me party" as my father claims. Proving to everyone that you CAN overcome the obsticles in your life shows that you have a goal, shows that you ARE strong. Your writing always holds a meaning of some sort, and it personally (to me) reaches out, extends a hand to bring someone up, someone who is waiting for your hand. Your writing is always well written, and I hope to read some more soon.

[TamiViolet]

I admire the fortitude in this piece. The notion that scars build character is realistic. Highly inspiration work.

[Elmehdi Adlany]

This is a strong poem, reflecting what you really are. I indeed like the confidence that you have in yourself. I have written recently a poem, having the same theme !

[_////---Elektrik Phanto..]

the strength of your character is portrayed well within each line you cast. nice solid work :) thanks