No Ending

Our life has no ending.

For we are stuck here

To deal with problems and failures.

We must learn to overcome them.

With confidence and spirits

And the power to believe in ourselves.

We are alive and well,

But not sure about the ending.

Reviews

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and they all lived happily ever after.....

[Broken.]

This I can really relate to. I'm always writing about the troubles of life and what will the end become. I love its simplicity and perfect word choice. It also puts out a strong message to the readers, that is (in my opinion) the best of all,
live life. Great write I look forward to reading more.

[Haeshin]

I like the content, it makes a lot of sense, but the lines about the ending confused me as to the point of the poem.

[Alisha Mark]

I'm not really sure what the point of this is. Your first expression is "our life has no ending" and you end with "but not sure about the ending." So, you're confusing me, and maybe others by saying there is no ending and then you're confused about the ending.

I feel like the first three lines should read as: "Our life has no ending; for we are stuck here to // deal with our problems, // our failures we must // learn to overcome. /|/ With confidence and spirits, // we are alive."