No Proof of Falling

Today I fell out of the sky.

Falling freely and aimlessly.

Maybe it's because of love,

Possibly not.

I never know.

Every time I seem to fall

i always blame it on love

But I never have any proof.

So I can never have a reason

To believe myself for my thoughts.

 

Reviews

[Looouise]

That's really simple yet very effective. I really liked that.

[Jami Nicole]

This peiceof work was awesome. It was the perfect length, it didn't cut off and it leaves you wondering about your own feelings. Very well done.

[Apathy To Empathy]

A gentle peice. Almost as if you're floating on a cloud wondering when youll slip through. I loved it. I feel as if I could attach myself in one way or another, even though I've fallen in love with one guy but never get to see him...Anyway, I love this piece. Keep Writing!!

[Jonathan Ballam]

*the simple

[Jonathan Ballam]

Succinct, honest, thoughtful and gentle. This was a great little annotation to those human moments we can catch ourselves in. Its great you're willing to explore and simple (and adversely profound) part of writing. Lovely!

[Moyo]

This poem has closure and I feel like I can relate to it, somehow. I like the writing style, it's not complicated at all and easy to understand.

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

I have a friend that falls in love at least once a month.
To know a person like that...causes one to read this
poem as a testament to the human experience. Great work.