Beautiful Money

Today is the day

To be beautiful.

I feel beautiful

With all this jewelry and expensive clothes.

They make everyone respect me

And let them know how rich I am.

But they dare not ask for any of my cash

Because they know i will not give them any.

Even if they begged me nicely.

This economy is coming to a close

And yet, all of my money is still here.

None of it has disappeared

But has kept me alive and happy!

Reviews

[nunldon]

Beware of worshiping false idols; I'm sure you would be beautiful (in Gods eyes) without it. And mine.
$$$ injoy

[Sayre]

I felt as if there was plenty of sarcasm to be sought out and understood here. The thought progressions was a little bland, but nonetheless it kept me interested enough to finish, and I understood the point [I feel]. Not bad, but you could improve.

[The Perfectionist]

Well that's...interesting. I don't know what to say about this. It is was it is. It's fine, well-written, but it's hardly compelling or interesting. Well done, I suppose.