Army of Poison and Thorns

This is how I am
From the hole you've created.
It is poison
It means death.
I have faced it in battle
A strong force.
It's army holds a thousand
Spikes and thorns
To tear at my heart
And my precious soul.
But I haven't let them get hit
By the deadly army.

Reviews

[Apathy To Empathy]

Well done. Straight to the point, and if you think about it, it's deep. Very nice.

[The Perfectionist]

It starts and it ends, and it gets through what it wants to say. I wish I had more to say, and I wish this poem did too. It feels like it represents and unfinished story (which is not to say the poem itself is incomplete, as it isn't) and as such it's difficult to really say anything about it.

[Luna]

This is amazingly well written! It is short (relatively speaking, you don't have to scroll down very much, lol), sweet, and to the point.