Lost

I cannot reach the light
That I'm searching for.
I see it
It's just out of my reach.
Is my arm too short?
Or is the light too far away?
The light resembles who I am
And it is out of reach.
So, in that case
I don't know who I am.
I am lost.

Reviews

[Apathy To Empathy]

I pictured myself standing in a dark world, this beam of light seeping through, and your poem made me think, maybe my arms are too small and that the light is so far. Maybe if I find a way to reach it, I could see who I really am in a way.

I enjoyed it. Your poems are very unique. It may of been short and all but, hey, so much emotion dwelled within the words. The words went straight to the point and kept the emotions alive. I love it. Keep writing.

[Chelsea.]

short, but meaningful.
Nicely written :)

[beezle]

this is so short...and perfect...it says so much in so little words...words that force me to feel exactly what is being felt by the writer...sad..yet beautiful...wonderful peice.

[Havatara]

This was fantastic. It was short and to the point, yet it had so much emotion in it. The only thing I saw was in likes 3 and 4, do you want to have a comma or something after 3? Because otherwise it seems like you're saying it's all the same "breath" or whatever, when it seems like it should be two. Do you get what I'm saying? Other than that it was amazing and I can't wait to read more of your work!