The Stars

Shining stars

They shine so purely

With the endless light

Like an explosion

A fireball

But it's just so beautiful.

We admired and are inspired

I am.

The stars are who I am

I wish to live upon them

Make them my brothers and sisters

They are who I love.

Forever, they will be my darlings.

Reviews

[Tony]

Ok, this is what I mean. 'The Stars' is a more personal glimpse of the author. I can't wait to go! What is it like there?
This poem reminds me of how awesome it is to be so insignificant, and so aware of it.
A+

[TessaLee]

I really liked it...and I do LIKE it.........

[Dev]

Nice !!
One thing. Correct me if i'm wrong .. line 7 . should'nt it be "We Admire and are inspired"