I'm Mad Because...

This is the day i got back from vacation along the east coast with my parents and ssister and how i was mad

I'm mad becuase people get yell at me for nothing

I'm mad becuase I'm the one to get blamed when everyone else has gotten the past set of blame

I'm mad because I feel as if I can do nother right anymore.

I'm mad becuase I am falling apart from who I once was.

I'm mad becuase no one trusts me with anything

I'm mad because no one knows me

I'm mad because no one can see me

I'm mad becuase I am needing to be heard and no one can take the time to hear me.

I'm mad becuase I am alone...

Reviews

[Dillon Cotter]

this is something thats true yet wonderful to udnerstand and realize. thanks for you kind wisdom and heart in ur writing.

[TeenRomance]

All I can say is: Ditto.

[deadlife]

WOW! A perfect rant....yeah I know this...most of us do. We all are MAD at the same thing. we scream. cry. Die. But it doesn't make any difference. Never. I appreciate every word you've written... it's just the way it should be...straight from the heart... from inside. like a volcano.....as it bursts.....just from the inside....hot...burning...Magma......like your words. heartily appreciated. But there's one thing more.... try to not to be mad, life is what we made it...we get what we want because we made ourselves the way we are..its always our decision. so i just look at your wonderfully penned piece in a different perspective...not too different though. the way its written is very true I'm mad (obviously at myself) because I'm Alone and vice-versa just look at it in a different light..and believe it's the way we see things makes all the difference. Ah hope you don't mind this lecture stuff.... but i'm just so deeply moved that i can't stop myself writing this...so try reading it this way and obviously You've Written it This Way...its just you've noticed the flip side more prominently :)
People get yell at me for nothing.. because I'm mad
I'm the one to get blamed when everyone else has gotten the past set of blame.. because I'm mad
I feel as if I can do nother right anymore... because I'm mad
I am falling apart from who I once was... becuase I'm mad
No one trusts me with anything.. because I'm mad
No one knows me.. because I'm mad
No one can see me... because I'm mad
I am needing to be heard and no one can take the time to hear me.. becuase I'm mad
I am alone... because I'm mad (AT MYSELF) !
Bless you dear.....take care.

[Pencalibur]

Love it. This is how I feel this very moment. Ooooh I just love life!

[J A Lauder]

There's a lot of us out there who feel exactly the same, you've managed to get everything down brilliantly, I couldn't have worded it better myself. Nice one.

[Donovan "Grey Wolf" Go..]

the thought of being alone haunts everyone but if u look at it everyone needs to be alone to learn things. Its good.

[H]

I'm angry for all those reasons as well. You're not alone in the world.

[kewlbluetiger]

Really good poem. You conveyed the feeling very well. I think we can often feel abandoned at times, and many of us can sympathize. It's hard when you live away from the ones you love and then you have such a short time to understand feelings. (Crit part) I know you might have written this when you were angry, but there's a wording error in the first line, I think you forgot the word "to". Okie?! Hope you feel better after getting your feelings out on paper! Love the write.