No One Knows

No One Knows

A Poem by I Am Svetlana

The life is gone

Beyond and past the existance of man

The land is bare

No leaves hang or rustle on the towering trees

Sun has set and hasn't risen

Darkness has left us something no so special.

It takes so long to simply write the lines of fate

Late whispers keep me awake and sane

I admire the songs they so lovely sing

I have chosen to write my brains out

Since talking to someone, I never get every word out on the table.

Every problem that seems to bother me...

 

© 2009 I Am Svetlana


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I loved this, I like the style, it's black but it seems really contemporary like, 'Writing my brains out' - it just fits when it shouldn't.

'Sun has set and hasn't risen' - stunning. You definitely have some great lines in you.


Posted 15 Years Ago


I see the beauty in darkness :)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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I Am Svetlana
I Am Svetlana

Madison, WI



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"If you cannot write well; you cannot think well; if you cannot think well, other's will do your thinking for you." -Oscar Wilde Hello all, my name is Emily Svetlana! I am 30 years old and wo.. more..

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