Blinded Universe

I don't know what I see.

I can't see anything.

Nothing is what I see in this place.

It's all just a blur to my vision and can't put anything to mind.

You aren't in sight either...can't you see me?

Nowhere are you in my sight..

I wish to open my eyes and glance at your beautiful face, but that can't work at this time.

You are able to see the world and witness its happenings.

I cannot do that.

I open my eyes and I see blur or black.

Nothing is what I see.

Reviews

[Through the Gateway]

Truly an interesting poem. It speaks more of confusion than of real physical blindness. The lack of imagery lets us know that you feel completely separated from the rest of the world.

I wonder what inspired this.

[bluessadmood]

Oh sign of the time..sickness of these times..lovely words
I try to see but nothing..All just a blur ,I am losing vision
Nothing comes to my mind ,its like nothing playing
Lovely words..