There Is Nothing

There Is Nothing

A Poem by I Am Svetlana

There is nothing

Nothing I can say or do

I'll own up to what damage I have caused to everyone and even myself.

How do I fix all the destruction?

There is no way, only becuase no one will tell me what I have done.

I must figure everything out by myself

Alone and with no one else.

What is the worst that I could have done?

To people and myself?

No one understands me or what I do and why

I follow my own rules and I will find out what I have done

© 2008 I Am Svetlana


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wow thats touching and alot like the world i live in today

Posted 14 Years Ago


The poem's length suits it well, conveying the message in just enough lines without dragging on. The poem actually flows quite well, and the word choice is good. Overall it's a good poem.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I can also relate. I recently wrote a piece on it too.
Overall, I like how it's not too short, but not overbearing with the message that you are trying to get across.
I think you did a good job.

Posted 15 Years Ago


I used to be like this.
For a long time.
So I can definitely relate to what you're feeling.
Sometimes it's hard but you have to sit down and decide what really matters and what doesn't.
Great poem.
Thanks for taking the time to write and add this.
-Elissa :)

Posted 15 Years Ago



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Added on December 30, 2008

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I Am Svetlana
I Am Svetlana

Madison, WI



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