Lifes Equations

The many equations of life are injected into the earth

For man to put them together and figure out the secret formula for our living

What is the reason for life?

Is it to live life to it's fullest?

Or to kill it off with the dumb desicions that we seem to make at times?

I never seem to put the right formulas together

But hey, we all learn from our mistakes in one way or another.

Reviews

[Luna]

I really like this! It's very solid and straight to the point. Nice work!

[Wunderlich]

This poem is simple, but solid. The first line is very good, as it is easy to comprehend, but opens up the poem very well. This combination of simplicity, straight-forwardness, and truth is excellent. I really like this; good job.

[Mysterious and Stranger]

Nice words . And to the point !!!
Keep writing more !!

[Bexers]

What you said is very true!
I like how your writings (from what I have had a chance to read) are short and to the point. I do enjoy that. Keep it up!

[juwinahaftner]

nice poem. i hope that you keep writing in the future, and keep nurturing your skills as an poet. mhhmm.

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Doesn't seem like much of a choice to me! Full versus dumb? But then again, perhaps you are right: over 90 percent choose the latter, and consistently, each and every day of their lives.

A nice piece of verse! I look forward to reading more soon!