Frustration

Frustration

A Poem by I Am Svetlana

 So frustrated

Why does everyone have to be on one side?

I'm stressed out and can't reach anyone

I feel alone and cold at night

Just thinking of what they have said to me

Good things never seem to help anymore

I am burrowing down into a black hole

What now?

I can't turn back, but I must face them alone

© 2008 I Am Svetlana


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this is how i feel most of the time

Posted 14 Years Ago


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Zak
I like this work. It portrays a feeling of sadness throughout, then at the end, It almost seems to go into hatred towards those who have wronged you. Then the poem ends.

Though, I wonder what you mean by "everyone have to be on one side."
In this piece, are you tired of them constantly being on your side, or tired of them constantly being against you? You've given an intriguing thought.
Keep a' writing!

Posted 15 Years Ago



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I Am Svetlana

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