Rough Draft

I am a rough draft

(all you are is a blank paper)

Dipping my toe into a pool of sadness

(a lovely place to play)

A glimpse of the wolf in the shadows

(a girl with a pen)

Mixing their potions

(the darkness scares me more)

I'll dig through the dirt

(I have never been pure)

Cry for another chance

(the trait of invisibility)

My reflection stays the same

(nothing more than a lie)

If we keep walking

Reviews

[Pax]

Our life indeed is a blank paper, everything seems like a rough draft, we use every pen and color we see to just to bring some joys, yet our tears seems to fill our pools of sadness, now it's deep enough for anyone who doesn't know how to swim will drown... But with all that I'm sure there is a ray of light somewhere far, we just have to look for it...