Create Me

Create me
As I stand before you.

Draw the very lips
You wish to fall in love with.
Pop in the eyes that
Will always leave you in a daze.
Mold out the curves that
You would love to touch.
The perfect tongue that
Could gracefully caress yours with each kiss.

Create me
As I stand before you.
I'm all yours.
Just yours.

Reviews

[Kye R H]

Absolutely beautiful work! It feels weightless, but has so much depth.
We are all shaped by the people around us, but willing for it to happen or being conscious of it implies a whole other experience. The sort of love you feel here is made clear, and I'm sure all those who have felt this form of love recognize it immediately.
Thanks for sharing this!

[Relic]

This is so well written. The artist has created the perfect mate which comes alive (mentally) just for him. Great poem.

[SN]

Powerful words and yet so simply put. I think that makes it even more powerful. Loved it.

[Moonlight]

Wow! That's an intersting piece of writing! It has so much depth to it. And, it is a really unique theme you write of plus you have penned it very eloquently. I loved it! Thanks for sharing! :)

[ANTO]

I wondered after reading if a build-a-bear type workshop would help guys to stay with one girl, the girl of their dreams, their own personal creation and then I thought - knowing what I know, I doubt it.
A unique concept Svetlana and well executed too. Piques the interest
thanks

[Ghost of Jupiter]

Wanting one to mold you into love itself... Just a beautiful sensual piece. Lovely to be reading your work again. :)

[Zakari Schmidt]

Wow, this is such a clever poem!! Who you create is what you become. Although we have our whole lives and a few chances, time is a bitter tool, it carves away/

[T.F.Coelho]

Oure and enticing. I feel it all in my mind.

[Shane William]

Very beautiful. Although it sounds like 'Create me part 2' :p

[Not Your Typical New Yo..]

Oh, a touch of seductive.... Everybody has their own types, and I like the idea of someone molding their perfect lover or "sex toy" in this very work.