Create Me

Create me
As I stand before you.

Draw the very lips
You wish to fall in love with.
Pop in the eyes that
Will always leave you in a daze.
Mold out the curves that
You would love to touch.
The perfect tongue that
Could gracefully caress yours with each kiss.

Create me
As I stand before you.
I'm all yours.
Just yours.

Reviews

[Kye R H]

Absolutely beautiful work! It feels weightless, but has so much depth.
We are all shaped by the people around us, but willing for it to happen or being conscious of it implies a whole other experience. The sort of love you feel here is made clear, and I'm sure all those who have felt this form of love recognize it immediately.
Thanks for sharing this!

[Quinn]

Incredible. So much depth with a poem that makes you feel unique and it's incredible. Fantastic write.

[emmajoy]

Touch me with each and every one of your instincts; create your own feast, let me feed you..
tell me how.

[Wasekera S Chiphazi Ban..]

"create me" wow this is just perfect ,,Great work, keep it up

[Demetri J]

I'm not sure what it means by "create" but I applaud the amount of sensuality and sexual tension you were able to express in such little words

[Echoes of Eros]

I love these aspects of your passion and surrender; how you stand and offer yourself as a work of art to be molded and shaped into pure perfection. In this beautiful way you become a canvas of pleasure and life and love in the deepest way. xo

[icelandicblue]

A very hypnotic piece of poetry. We are who we are through our own eyes and the eyes of another.

[An owl on the moon]

Beautifully stirring words of surrender... how you desire to give of yourself to the very presence of love... and to melt into the oneness of life's most precious gift.. you... Stunning...

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Perfection is hungry fantasy. Make me your perfect dish and let me satisfy you. Sweet creativity, dear poet :)

[Lydia Shutter]

Gloriously romantic and vividly sensual...an elegant write, Svetlana. I enjoyed it so much. Lydi**

[Jamie]

Beautiful piece of work :) Great job!