Create Me

Create me
As I stand before you.

Draw the very lips
You wish to fall in love with.
Pop in the eyes that
Will always leave you in a daze.
Mold out the curves that
You would love to touch.
The perfect tongue that
Could gracefully caress yours with each kiss.

Create me
As I stand before you.
I'm all yours.
Just yours.

Reviews

[Kye R H]

Absolutely beautiful work! It feels weightless, but has so much depth.
We are all shaped by the people around us, but willing for it to happen or being conscious of it implies a whole other experience. The sort of love you feel here is made clear, and I'm sure all those who have felt this form of love recognize it immediately.
Thanks for sharing this!

[JBoone]

Beautiful. So well done. Very clear and full of power.

[Arman]

nice writing, i really loved it.
Create me
As I stand before you.
I'm all yours.
Just yours.

[??????]

Wow that was a very very image of beauty you created:)

[Kuro]

Marvelous. So fluid. It makes me think of a woman who loves unconditionally. The theme of changing yourself for another is selfless and evocative of the need for love.

[Antoñyo]

Lacking better current words, "Bloody Hell, this is good!"
It's also multi-dimensional, inspiring "Who says that....and where do they assemble them?" But at the same time, a tender announcement, "I am willing to be your rope...Don't hang yourself!"
Awesome piece
Thanks for the share!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Very nice poem. I like the title very much "Create Me " :)

[Nisreen]

To give oneself
holding nothing back
asking for this person to create a reality of you and him

this is stunning

[hanir]

Sensual piece...creatively written!

[Maggie]

A gentle reminder and indicator of love just beginning to bloom. It reminds me of a time when I was younger and my relationship was just beginning to bud. Lightless.