Tell Me Reality

Sleep won't take me
because my hands are tied
by the ones who despise me.
I wasn't the loved one.
I was the lost daughter.
Drowning deeper within the fantasy stories.
Just wishing for a hopeful happy ending.
Tired of the dread and despair.
Wanting only to disappear.
Begging for someone, anyone
to find me.
Someone to tell me
reality wasn't so bad.

Reviews

[Half Dream]

"Sleep won't take me
because my hands are tied
by the ones who despise me.
I wasn't the loved one.
I was the lost daughter."

I like the emotions you put in this piece. Everybody wants to find there happy ending of there story. I know I'm still waiting but I hope you won't wait too long. Thanks for sharing this amazing write. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Scott Metro]

If you have not since found someone...you surely will.
Your words are selective, choice, concise...
Well done..
P.S. Don't disappear ...

Scott

[Buddhistboy73]

a sad story here....and yet, there is hope within the last lines of your poem my friend....:)
"Begging for someone, anyone to find me"......and they surely will.....for life has a funny way of working out...for us meeting inspirational/helpful souls just at the moment we think that the lights have been snuffed out, and all is dark....believe my friend.....the light is just around the corner for you too....:)

A great write.....full of emotions...:)
BB

[Laura Harrison]

I can relate to this, and I have found the person to tell "reality isn't so bad" and you will too :) Nice write

[unbrakable fragile gir..]

outstanding emotion, I feel your pain and I can really relate .great job with the wording it took you in and held on to you intill the end . short but emotional are always the best .keep it up makes me want to read all your writing.

[Jared Michael Smith]

I feel like this would be the thoughts of a more modern Cinderella... Very nice. :)