Suffer

She look in the mirror
Tears just fall down her cheeks
Like a mile long race
She yells
She scream
She is in so much suffering
She trys to show him
She tried so hard
But this suffer she is in just pushes them away
Its crazy when you see
The only girl in your dream
Crying and hurting you
But she not trying to make you bleed
This suffer is killing her
The pain is strong
She will always love you
No matter what.

Reviews

[Raeven]

Raw emotion is one of the best ways I've found to write. Great piece.