Falling

Falling

A Poem by Harmonee-Rose

I fall into a hole
Unable to get out
I fall into a gutter
Unable to get up

I fall into a nightmare
unable escape
I run and run and run
But I must accept my fate

I'm Falling .....
Falling from life
Falling from hurt
Falling from all the things...
that made my life invert

I just keep falling
into a hole
into a gutter
into a nightmare
and out of life

Just for once..
I'd like to be..
Falling into a dream

© 2013 Harmonee-Rose


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I like this a lot, it just describes reality to me, because if you fall when you get knocked down that's all you want to do is dream and sometimes that can be so hard once you've fallen,

is there supposed to be a "to" in the line "unable escape" ? or did you do that on purpose?

Posted 11 Years Ago


Harmonee-Rose

11 Years Ago

yer theres suppose to be a to .. i didnt realise i had left it out thank you
xx Harmz
zaneybear

11 Years Ago

haha no problem:) just asking

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Harmonee-Rose
Harmonee-Rose

Redland Bay, Brisbane , Australia



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theres not much about me , i love music and poetry , um my poems and stories dont always reflect me but i love them more..

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