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A Poem by Em!<3 =3)
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I'm not good at this at all xD lol

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The feeling of the tear.

That run's your life.

The feeling of that pain.

That your so scared of.

The betrayal that we keep going back for.

© 2011 Em!<3 =3)


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oh okay lol but still it's not good and i ment tear but oh well i leave it xD


Posted 13 Years Ago
It's good, work on it, and add more to it. You don't have to force or rush poetry, becuase it's something that comes naturally. (:

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Em!<3 =3)
Em!<3 =3)

Winnebago, IL



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I like food...um i like to drawl and write song's story's thing's like that oh and I like video game's and sport's and well yea.. Oh and i like hanging out with friend's but everybody does so yea more..

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