Warrior

Warrior

A Poem by Nya
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Something I wrote when I was feeling down and broken

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What is the use of happiness
If it doesn't last.
What is the use of love
If it only leaves you in pain.

You are a warrior
And warriors live alone

For it is sadness
That will always dominate.
And in the loneliness
The true you will prevail.

You are a warrior
Do you want to be alone?

With every heartbreak,
With every tear,
With every sob,
You grow stronger.

Are you a warrior
For warriors live alone

What is the use of happiness
If it doesn't last.
What is the use of love
If it only leaves you in pain.

You are a warrior
And warriors live alone.

© 2016 Nya


Author's Note

Nya
Like I say in my Bio, I'm only 19 and not a professional, I would like opinions and constructive criticism. Please don't be rude.. :)

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"For it is sadness
That will always dominate.
And in the loneliness
The true you will prevail."
The above lines were beautifully expressed but somewhat sad.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Very Beautiful. Yes indeed you are a warrior .

Posted 8 Years Ago


Like your poem. I would take out the line. With every sob. Makes it stronger.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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Added on November 6, 2016
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Nya
Nya

Potchefstroom, North West province, South Africa



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