When She Came Along

Goodbye to a friend, whom someone took and made their own. To a friend, whom you love more, but can never hold on.

When She Came Along

 

 

I remember when we used to be friends,
The laughter we shared and the time we spent.
You helped me on what I don't know,
This is how our friendship would show.

Months passed, but our friendship was fine the way along,
But then it all shattered when she came along.
The time of our friendship was no more,
And she is the one you now adore.

Days after days, I see the laughter you share,
That was everything I have to spare.
My heart starts aching at the very sight,
But this very tears I have to fight.

When she came along, her attention was on you,
Leaving me out, with nothing else to do.
When she came along, your time was with her,
She is the one you so much prefer.

It seems to me, that you both are meant to be,
And our friendship is lost, that "YOU and ME".
You were the one who brightened up my day,
But now my sunny sky is filled with clouds so grey.

You seem to be happy, with her, and not me,
So, now, I'll just have to let it be.
Just so you know, I'm always here for you,
Because that's what true friends always do.

But is there a possibility that our friendship will be back?
Because communication is really all we lack.
But she is the one that you adore,
It's like I don't even exist anymore.

My heart is shuttered into a thousand pieces,
But still, every night, I still kept making wishes.
What if, we could be more than this?

The moments of us together, I so miss.

But could I wish that we could be more?

You mean more than a friend to me, way back; before.

Afraid that you don't feel the same, because of her,

Now I can't tell you what I feel, letting it burn.

But since, you have gone away.
It seems like the rain is falling everyday.
I would give all my tomorrows for that one yesterday,
Just to know that it will be back our way.

When will this river of tears stop falling.
But I can't walk away when the pain keeps calling.
And there's still many dreams of you,
That are left in my mind, but can never come true.

I look back at our yesterday and remember when,
I closed my eyes and our friendship is back again.
But in the very end, I can still feel the pain,
Every time I hear your very name.

i want to runaway, but I just can't escape,
The memories of you and me, everywhere.
But, some say that time can dry my tears,
But they won't, even for a thousand years.

I want to run,
So that, I won't feel alone.
But how can I fell not empty?
When you are far away from me.

But now, I must learn how to let go,
And learn how to live on my own.
This is the way its all going to be,
Until I will get over you and me.

Reviews

[Avinash]

It's music of a broken heart. When we are in love its actually "You" who you love through someone's eyes. It's just that that those moments cant come back. Agree one part of you dies with every love but still it is an image. The real you still deserves the same love may be not in the same way.
What I have learnt from my own share of heartbreaks..to earn my own love for myself. If I am able to be successful in that, nothing or no one can hurt. My small suggestion on personal note..." Love yourself" without anyone's acceptance or approval.

[ElyriaMaine]

I'm moved by your comment, somehow poetic in a sense. ^-^

[Gleb Zavlanov]

A great poem. Very musical and with a deep meaning. It loved it. Thank you for sharing.

[ElyriaMaine]

Thanks for the compliment. ^-^

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write. Very emotive...:)

[ElyriaMaine]

Thanks a lot. ^-^

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[ElyriaMaine]

This poem is dedicated to one of my best friends who thought she had found the "ONE". :) I love you girl! And as your best friend, I suggest, you start getting over him and start finding someone new. There's still a lot of fish in the sea. :)

[ElyriaMaine]

This is my first poem so far. Hope you guys like it. Please comment for my improvement. :)