Who Knew?

Who Knew?

A Poem by ElyriaMaine
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People do not know when their lives will end. But who knew, some of us would go too soon.

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Who Knew?



For you're a friend, but indeed I'll be gone,

The laughter, the joy, will be all done.

The mem'ries that you and I share,

Problems encounters, we did bear.

 

 

Who knew, through the years, our friendship was no more,

My days are numbered, as my days start to soar.

Before I'll be gone, I'll leave you this note,

Hoping that you'll remember, that you're life has a worth.

 

 

You lifted my spirit, when I am down,

Letting me smile; removing my frown.

Saying to me, that they are all wrong,

Knowing that, in a short while, I'll be gone.

 

 

Who knew that I would disappear from this world?

My eyes start to water; everything's in a blur.

Who knew, oh to soon, I will die?

Who knew, that this would be the end of my life?

 

 

Dearest friend, put in your mind,

That I will never leave your side.

'Cause will be best of friend, forever me and you,

This life of mine will disappear, but who knew?

© 2013 ElyriaMaine


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The mystery of life and death. I tell people. Enjoy life. We are here for a short time only. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry.
Coyote

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A deep and profound write regarding the bonds of true friendship. Great work. In the last stanza third line you should add an 's to the word friend. All in all a wonderful write of epic proportions. :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

It is nice romantic way of saying bye to the beloved before you cease to exist. Nobody knows whats beyond death but at least it gives solace to the departing heart that his/her love will live on in the others.
Beautiful piece.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ElyriaMaine

11 Years Ago

Thanks for your time and for the compliment. :) It means a lot. :)

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ElyriaMaine
ElyriaMaine

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