Our Skies

Our Skies

A Poem by EloisaWrites
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A Valentine poem

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Your sky is the sunset

while I am the morning sun.

A night is between us,

a starless dawn.


Your passion a full spectrum

shut in clouds of rain.

Mine is a fiery cosmos;

a warm summer's gleam.


Over time, our skies

bypass the dark of night;

painting a rainbow bridge,

dreamy afternoon laughs.


I fire up your dreams;

you cool down my whims.

And over the horizon,

our colors kissed.

© 2014 EloisaWrites


Author's Note

EloisaWrites
I hope you like it. :)

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i don't like it---i love it.

opposites attract and you carried the metaphors of opposite horizons through this so beautifully i was mesmerized from start to finish..one of the best poems i have read in a long while.

man the ending is just an explosion...grabbed me and wouldn't let me go.

jacob

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

EloisaWrites

10 Years Ago

Your appreciation humbled me so much I was teary-eyed. Thank you, Jacob. :)



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i don't like it---i love it.

opposites attract and you carried the metaphors of opposite horizons through this so beautifully i was mesmerized from start to finish..one of the best poems i have read in a long while.

man the ending is just an explosion...grabbed me and wouldn't let me go.

jacob

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

EloisaWrites

10 Years Ago

Your appreciation humbled me so much I was teary-eyed. Thank you, Jacob. :)
"Our colors kissed"....heavy sigh! How very romantic this is and truly it proves what the old saying says, "Opposites Attract!" Beautifully written with splendid imagery. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

EloisaWrites

10 Years Ago

I have actually written this on the way home inside a public vehicle. When I hear the first words in.. read more
I paused here and left with a smile... Happy Valentine's Day.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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EloisaWrites

10 Years Ago

I'm glad it got through you that way. Have a marvelous one! :)
Yes,it is a splendid work.
I can imagine an amazing romantic pair frolicking in Valentine's day.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

EloisaWrites

10 Years Ago

Thank you so much, Zainul. Happy Valentine's day. :)
zainul

10 Years Ago

You are most welcome,Eloisa.
Happy Valentine's day. :)
Ah...
A complimenting of opposites...
Yes, this can lead to stability.
Either way, I see a shining skyline of colorful love.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

EloisaWrites

10 Years Ago

Thank you, David. :)
"I fire up your dreams;
you cool down my whims.
And over the horizon,
our colors kissed."

A beautiful poem. The ending was marvelous...:)............

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

EloisaWrites

10 Years Ago

You're very kind, Sami. Glad you like it. :)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

I did. You are welcome kindly...:)................

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Added on February 13, 2014
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EloisaWrites
EloisaWrites

Antipolo City, Rizal, Philippines



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I'm a believer of humanity. I am fascinated by the weird and the goth, an admirer of good writings and good-natured people, a tough-looking crybaby and a daydreamer. I love coffee, cats, a good pen, a.. more..

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