opposites attract and you carried the metaphors of opposite horizons through this so beautifully i was mesmerized from start to finish..one of the best poems i have read in a long while.
man the ending is just an explosion...grabbed me and wouldn't let me go.
jacob
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Your appreciation humbled me so much I was teary-eyed. Thank you, Jacob. :)
opposites attract and you carried the metaphors of opposite horizons through this so beautifully i was mesmerized from start to finish..one of the best poems i have read in a long while.
man the ending is just an explosion...grabbed me and wouldn't let me go.
jacob
Posted 10 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
10 Years Ago
Your appreciation humbled me so much I was teary-eyed. Thank you, Jacob. :)
"Our colors kissed"....heavy sigh! How very romantic this is and truly it proves what the old saying says, "Opposites Attract!" Beautifully written with splendid imagery. Lydi**
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
I have actually written this on the way home inside a public vehicle. When I hear the first words in.. read moreI have actually written this on the way home inside a public vehicle. When I hear the first words in my head, I cannot help but write it until the end. I can say that this poem is also a gift to me while contemplating about love. Thanks for the confidence, Lydi. :)
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