Stars

Stars

A Poem by EloisaWrites
"

Just one lonely night and then I looked at the sky.

"
shackles and metal weights
broke her wings in flight
with scales uneven 
and the juries blind
her feat deemed empty, in disregard
on a night
while she bleeds as the world revives
why, the moon, like the stars, 
glitters unbelievably bright.

© 2014 EloisaWrites


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"while she bleeds as the world revives
why, the moon, like the stars,
glitters unbelievably bright."


Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

No matter what is happening in our lives, no matter how dark and dreary, seeing the stars glitter and the moon shimmer can make it all seem worthwhile again. A celestial beauty of a write. Lydi**

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

EloisaWrites

10 Years Ago

Wow. Very true. Thanks, Lydi. :)
That's deep... I'm totally speechless. It's a beautiful poem!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

EloisaWrites

10 Years Ago

Wow. So glad you liked it. It did came from somewhere lonely. Just one of those nights. Thanks. :)
No telling what we will see when we look up at the night sky. The bright moon, the stars, flights... A splendid poem...:)................

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

EloisaWrites

10 Years Ago

Thank you for always visiting, Sami. :)
Sami Khalil

10 Years Ago

You are welcome...:)................

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Added on January 31, 2014
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EloisaWrites
EloisaWrites

Antipolo City, Rizal, Philippines



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I'm a believer of humanity. I am fascinated by the weird and the goth, an admirer of good writings and good-natured people, a tough-looking crybaby and a daydreamer. I love coffee, cats, a good pen, a.. more..

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