Do you know it?

Do you know it?

A Poem by EloisaWrites
"

secret feelings.

"

If I am looking away

to betray

that glimpse of you

in your shadowed seat

peeking sideways

to catch

that glimpse of me

in my sunlit seat

Am I not looking?

 

If I am passively listening

to revert

those words from you

in your masked confessions

sounding insincere

to kill

these words from me

attempting not to endear

Am I not listening?

 

If I am holding back

to conceal

our selfish dreams

sitting side by side

not feeling anyway

to deny

what we desire

yet aching anyway

Am I not holding out?

© 2013 EloisaWrites


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I could almost see the two of them...sitting across the room for one another furtively glancing in each other's direction. A cute scene, but the truth is unless one decides to communicate with the other, no true relationship is possible. You really painted the scene well here. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

EloisaWrites

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the review, Lydi. :)



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I could almost see the two of them...sitting across the room for one another furtively glancing in each other's direction. A cute scene, but the truth is unless one decides to communicate with the other, no true relationship is possible. You really painted the scene well here. Lydi**

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

EloisaWrites

10 Years Ago

Thank you for the review, Lydi. :)

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Added on November 5, 2013
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Tags: bittersweet love, untimely love, secret love

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EloisaWrites
EloisaWrites

Antipolo City, Rizal, Philippines



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I'm a believer of humanity. I am fascinated by the weird and the goth, an admirer of good writings and good-natured people, a tough-looking crybaby and a daydreamer. I love coffee, cats, a good pen, a.. more..

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