Your Untouchable Ionic Style

Your Untouchable Ionic Style

A Poem by Eloha


I seek a woman bolder than my brief delight

Of her quenching form, her pregnant style

I seek a form of love & literature

 

I cannot seem to discover, a discreet

Vocabulary & emotion I cannot design

A herald of the impossible of embrace

 

Of cultures radically different thirsting for unison

I seek Goddess-palms delicate and sweet

The stars have predicted we should fight

 

With the drama of opposites, from your red mouth

I would kiss demons with a fond caress

Taste the bitter-nectar of your hallucinations

 

Scatter your shortness of breath to the night

Regal and proud you would stand before me

In divine nakedness, begging to be touched

 

I seek to reach your strange illumined intensity

I cannot seem to discover, a mystery

Some sensation you experience, that I miss

Some drug of endless effort I have not taken. 

© 2013 Eloha


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Love the italics...exquisitely used, I might add :) A sexy, sensual and spiritual piece, filled with bold imagery, tangible sensations and a lustful wanting that is almsot palpable. I love the line "The stars have predicted we should fight"---lol This is a great line for me right now.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Girl Friday (Sarah W.)

11 Years Ago

Haha Well then you'd love me...lol
Eloha

11 Years Ago

If I get deathly ill, can I come to your ranch and just watch you ride horses and stuff?
Girl Friday (Sarah W.)

11 Years Ago

Of course...we have a really nice "viewing area" where I could provide blankets, soup and warm drink.. read more



Reviews

Love the italics...exquisitely used, I might add :) A sexy, sensual and spiritual piece, filled with bold imagery, tangible sensations and a lustful wanting that is almsot palpable. I love the line "The stars have predicted we should fight"---lol This is a great line for me right now.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Girl Friday (Sarah W.)

11 Years Ago

Haha Well then you'd love me...lol
Eloha

11 Years Ago

If I get deathly ill, can I come to your ranch and just watch you ride horses and stuff?
Girl Friday (Sarah W.)

11 Years Ago

Of course...we have a really nice "viewing area" where I could provide blankets, soup and warm drink.. read more

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