Shadows of What Was

Shadows of What Was

A Poem by Elnnes Scholtz
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Shadows of What Was delves into the profound emotions of regret and longing following a lost love, capturing the essence of unspoken words and missed opportunities

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Shadows of What Was

In the quiet of the night, I hear the sighs,
echoes of unspoken words drifting by,
whispers of what could have been, lingering still,
filling the empty spaces where love once thrived.

Once, our laughter danced like sunlight's glow,
but now silence wraps around us,
thick with the weight of memories lost,
each choice a door I dared not open.

Years slip by like sand through weary hands,
each grain a reminder of unmade plans,
of love that faded into shadows,
where hope flickered dimly, struggling to survive.

If only I could gather the broken threads,
stitch together the dreams now left for dead,
but regret settles in, heavy as stone,
a burden I carry, haunting my every thought.

I watch you from a distance, a fading light,
a silhouette against the encroaching night,
wondering if you feel this ache too?"
the heart’s deep longing for the love we once knew.


E.Scholtz

© 2024 Elnnes Scholtz


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I really like this poem. My feeling for the couple, that had a bright love, now there is distance, is sadness. The line "Years slip by like sand through weary hands" makes me think of the movie "Never ending story" where the giant rock biter talks about his hands looking strong and no matter how hard he try to hold on to his family the nothing took them. This was absolutely fantastic, you are a good poet.

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Dave W.

1 Week Ago

This is the last thing and I will stop bugging you. Have you been able to up load anything today? .. read more
Elnnes Scholtz

1 Week Ago

I posted this poem about an hour or 2 ago and was able to. Maybe try closing the site and reopening .. read more
Dave W.

1 Week Ago

Thankyou I will give it a try, now I will stop bugging you, have a great day.



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I just re-read your other poem " In the Garden of Us" and again felt overwhelmed by the joy expressed in it. now, we see the shadow of your previous work, and the contrast is stark. i guess, i am a sensitive person too, and i have some understanding of the highs and lows life brings. "Once, our laughter danced like sunlight's glow," the past participle "danced," this one word, conveys the feeling of loss so profoundly. applause!

Posted 1 Week Ago


I really like this poem. My feeling for the couple, that had a bright love, now there is distance, is sadness. The line "Years slip by like sand through weary hands" makes me think of the movie "Never ending story" where the giant rock biter talks about his hands looking strong and no matter how hard he try to hold on to his family the nothing took them. This was absolutely fantastic, you are a good poet.

Posted 1 Week Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dave W.

1 Week Ago

This is the last thing and I will stop bugging you. Have you been able to up load anything today? .. read more
Elnnes Scholtz

1 Week Ago

I posted this poem about an hour or 2 ago and was able to. Maybe try closing the site and reopening .. read more
Dave W.

1 Week Ago

Thankyou I will give it a try, now I will stop bugging you, have a great day.

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Added on October 24, 2024
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Elnnes Scholtz
Elnnes Scholtz

South Africa, South Africa



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