In the Garden of Us

In the Garden of Us

A Poem by Elnnes Scholtz
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The poem "In the Garden of Us" symbolizes a deep and nurturing love between two people

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In the Garden of Us

In the garden of us, where wildflowers bloom,
Time dances softly, casting away all gloom.
Each petal a whisper, each stem a sweet sigh,
As the sun kisses gently the canvas of sky.

Your laughter, a melody carried on the breeze,
A symphony woven through the rustling trees.
In the arms of the evening, as the stars take their place,
I find my reflection in your gentle embrace.

Our dreams intertwine like ivy on stone,
Roots deep in the earth, yet our spirits have flown.
With every heartbeat, a tapestry spun,
Two souls in the twilight, united as one.

The moon spills its silver, a promise anew,
Illuminating secrets only known to a few.
In the hush of the night, under celestial glow,
We carve our eternity, where wild rivers flow.

Oh, to love like this, where wild things run free,
To lose and to find in the depths of the sea.
With you, my dear heart, love's blossom unfolds,
In the garden of us, where true magic beholds.

So let’s wander forever, where time cannot tether,
With fingers entwined, in all kinds of weather.
For in this sweet union, beneath the stars’ trust,
I promise you always, in the garden of us.

© 2024 Elnnes Scholtz


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this is an incredible love poem. the sweetness of your emotions are transmitted through the page; reading this i can feel, a little bit, of how you feel right now. i see you in the distance, on a stage, basking in your light, and, in the shadows, an audience member, watching (perhaps with a bit of envy) the concert you sing.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Elnnes Scholtz

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words, Ern. I'm touched that the emotions I tried to convey came thr.. read more



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Its so beautiful and tender love poem , your words touch any romantic soul

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


A cloudy g'morning from Texas, Lady Ellnes 🌤️

Ya know? I've read thousands of love poems, have even written my share, each different in its own way, but none were so eloquently, so magically, so entreatingly composed with such an effulgently brilliant blend of metaphor and stardust stirred into every drop of the composer's vividly enchanting ink … as yours is here.
Are men supposed to "swooon," get shaky knees, melt like puddles into their socks, to hear words breathed to life in such warm soughing breaths? I cannot say, but to feel as though my words are too inferior to express the measure of succulent sensations derived … if one might perceive the poetic thrusts of these vibrantly explicit nuances.
Each line embraces imagery so rich in metaphorical wonderment they crescendo into a breathtaking verse that virtually joins the caressing hands of passion's exotica … thus, who with an ounce of warm blood coursing their veins could resist fawning over such bliss as:
"The moon spills its silver, a promise anew,
Illuminating secrets only known to a few. (Illuminating secrets known only to a few.)
In the hush of the night, under celestial glow,
We carve our eternity, where wild rivers flow."
"SHEESH!"

Ellnes,
Imbued within every word, line, and verse of this captivating work of sheer enthrallment, dances a revealment of your deepest, most imaginative inner-passion of absurdly, romantically-impossible, poetic majick … sighhh⁓*

I could pontificate pages on this gorgeously rendered piece, but lest I wear my welcome thin,
I'll close with a low sweeping bow of my graciously grateful chapeau! ⁓ Richard 🌾

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Elnnes Scholtz

3 Weeks Ago

Ah, Richard, you've left me at a loss for words—though you've stirred in me every reason to attemp.. read more
Richard🖌

2 Weeks Ago

What's not to adore in the magically warm embrace of this poem's avid entreat, too, the sigh of your.. read more
This poem revolves around love and connection, depicting an intimate relationship that flourishes in a metaphorical garden. It emphasizes the beauty of shared experiences and the intertwining of two souls as they navigate life together.❤❤

I LOVE THIS POEM, Exactly like my fav kinds. I see similarity to myself in your words, so I may visit very often to read your poems,. Great imagery and flow as well...

Thanks for sharing.
-Amy

Posted 1 Month Ago


A beautiful title and poem.
Very romantic and enchanting.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Elnnes Scholtz

1 Month Ago

Thank you, Sami. Appreciate your kind words and love for the poem. Have a blessed day!
Sami Khalil

1 Month Ago

You do the same. You are welcome.
You have a real gift for the use of rhyme, and your rhythms and meter are strong and musical.
The key, IMO, to rhyme is making it seem natural, almost accidental, and to find more slant rhymes that harder sounds. It isn't easy to do; combined with meter, it can be a real struggle.
I congratulate you on overcoming those obstacles in this fine musical piece.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Elnnes Scholtz

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much for your thoughtful feedback! I truly appreciate your insights on rhyme and meter,.. read more
Your words carry such a light zephyr of feeling throughout this poem. Seems to dance and fall slowly down the page as it descends. Love this couplet;-
The moon spills its silver, a promise anew,
Illuminating secrets only known to a few.
Always love moon imagery especially when it speaks of secrets and speaking to one alone. Lovely work!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Elnnes Scholtz

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much for your thoughtful review! I’m glad you felt the lightness and flow in the poem.. read more
this is an incredible love poem. the sweetness of your emotions are transmitted through the page; reading this i can feel, a little bit, of how you feel right now. i see you in the distance, on a stage, basking in your light, and, in the shadows, an audience member, watching (perhaps with a bit of envy) the concert you sing.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Elnnes Scholtz

1 Month Ago

Thank you so much for your kind words, Ern. I'm touched that the emotions I tried to convey came thr.. read more

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Added on October 23, 2024
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Elnnes Scholtz
Elnnes Scholtz

South Africa, South Africa



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