Kalis ng Kasalanan (English Version)A Story by Victor MakataMy name is Rey Cristanato; I have sinned; I regret it; All I ask for is forgiveness; But what I get is more than I ever wanted.THE HOLY GRAIL OF SIN *********** I don’t
understand why I’m terribly nervous. My heart pounded faster with every step I
take. My knees trembled in a manner that seemed weird to my senses. And the
heavy feeling I’ve been carrying in my chest for years now, have somewhat
doubled its weight and is now making it awfully hard for me to finally give in.
It is so hard to finally decide to give in, especially when you’ve spent
several years keeping to yourself in hiding; especially when you know that you
don’t deserve the time given from above. People are
scattered everywhere in Quiapo. Everyone had their own businesses to attend to.
There are people hoping for luck with fortune-tellers in street corners. There
are people talking to vendors that peppered the sidewalks, selling a vast
variety of goods and products. There are people making their way towards the
church to make wishes, to pray, to ask for forgiveness. I hastened my pace and
got inside. It was deeply foreign for me to be able to see the man crucified on
the cross, bowed and bleeding, but still addressed as ‘The King of Kings’, with
hardly anything but the stain of my sin keeping me from barging towards Him and
ask for dear forgiveness. No, I am too
horrible to deserve a chance to touch His image. I swallowed the growing
lump in my throat. If I knew that this was the sole feeling that would seep
through my skin, then I shouldn’t have come. But I’ve been bothered by my conscience for far too long. I have
repeatedly encountered sleepless nights, overwhelmed with so many thoughts. And
this time around, I can’t take it anymore. The mass ended
and the priest invited everyone that a confession would be held at the back.
Fortunately, only a few obliged and I was fourth in line. They each knelt down
and prayed; they cried for the sins they had committed. And I wholly understand
what they are feeling. But I can’t make myself cry as well. I can’t bear that I
be given mercy. It’s too horrific. It was my turn
to confess when I suddenly stopped dead in my tracks and felt my chest tighten
and my breathing almost gave in. Is this
how worse my deed has become? At a glance, I saw the priest and he told me
to come towards him. “It seems to me,
Boy, that you’ve been carrying something heavy in your chest for quite a time.
Do you wish to obtain confession?” he asked with gentleness evident on his
face. I wasn’t able to
mutter a reply and instead, gave a slight nod. Yes, I am here to confess.
May God forgive me.
When I glanced
around, the priest was gone. It somehow troubled me but I was immediately
relieved when I saw him enter the confession box. Probably so I will not fall
with so much guilt and shame when I confess my sin. I followed him and knelt
down on the other side of the box. In the usual tone he had mastered, the priest
said, “My child, you are here to confess your sins, right?” “Yes, I replied.
“Bless me, Father, for I have sinned. I have sinned and had kept it in my heart
for so long. This is my first and last confession.” I felt my heart contract
and I almost wanted to cry. Almost.
“You may state
your sins.” How?
How do I say it?
What do I have to say?
In so long that
I have hidden myself to the authorities, I have no clue where to start. It’s
terribly awful in the chest, but it’s like, even though it’s a terrible
feeling, you still don’t want to let it go because you’re frightened. That’s
what I’m feeling right now when I’m faced with someone who can judge me and the
intensity of my sin; someone who can mark me as a monster. I can’t speak. It
was like the wholeness of the dry soil under the soles of my shoes made its way
inside my throat and my breathing got caught. How do I do this?
I closed my
eyes. It’s better to be covered in darkness, in emptiness, rather than I be faced
with the reality of everything. But…my
existence in this world won’t last that long anyway. What am I still afraid of?
I took a deep
breath before I spoke. Thank goodness the
priest is patient and he waited patiently for me, “I have committed a sin,
terrible, and just horribly unforgivable. I do not wish that I may be forgiven,
but I wish that I may be heard.” “Please
continue, child…” “I admit that I
am a perverted man. I give in to the calls of temptation; the whispers of the
heart, the lustful desires of the skin. I gave in to the demon’s seduction and
I bathed in all the pleasure of human contact.” When I heard the words that
came out of my own mouth, I wanted to hang myself and vomit at the same time. I am disgusting. Disgusting! “Five women; five
beds; Five deceived and betrayed. Please forgive me.” “What
is the reason of your deception, boy?” the priest asked. The question startled
me but I shrugged it off and continued. “There
are many reasons why I did such deed. So many reasons…It was bliss for me;
because they fall so easily; they desperately clung to the call of their
desires. It is so easy, so fast that I am vexed by their desperate attempts to
get laid. They deserve it. They’re too liberated and it seemed that they didn’t
care about the chastity of their being. It was like they give no significance
to the holiness of marriage. Disgusting.
That’s why I deceive them, so they learn how to think twice and be clean.” “Says the dirty man as yourself,
right?” the priest remarked. My eyes widened. Why does he speak differently? So un-priestly? What does he want to
prove?
“I’m dirty, I know that. But am I
the only one? Same goes with you. No one is pure and innocent, Father…” I bit
back at him. “Five women; five beds; five deceived and betrayed; five lessons.
I taught them a lesson, because they give in to lust so easily. What do they
want to prove anyway? That they’re goddesses that are supposed to be worshipped
by men like me? I can’t accept it, they should learn.” “What did you do?” “Five women; five beds; five
deceived and betrayed; five lessons…five bodies. Cold and pale. Draped on the
bed; Lifeless, breathing nothing, eyes white as snow. One man laughing;
confessing in front of you, asking for forgiveness to the man on the cross, to
the man in heaven. I committed murder, Father.” “Do you admit it?” I
stopped. What? Why is he…? Who was
listening on the other side? I stood up and in deep panic, quickly went to
see who was there. I was faced with the emptiness of a round, black abyss,
aimed at my forehead, ready to release and break my skull. “Rey Cristanato, who admits the
crime of rape and murder to five women found dead, buried behind your house,
you are under arrest!” exclaimed the man in blue. His eyes were angry and full
of disgust. His breathing was rugged and fast. I didn’t raise my arms. “Put your hands in the air!” he shouted. “You talk like you’ve been
crucified on the cross.” I uttered. “You’re not clean, as far as I’m concerned.
Hypocrites. You’re using this place, His Temple! Shame on you for accusing me,
who is here to confess, to ask for forgiveness for the sin that I’ve committed!
Wow, hands down!” I clapped my hands in a sarcastic manner. “You have the right to remain
silent! Talk and I’ll shoot you!” “…and you would commit murder.” I
continued for him. “Wouldn’t it be that if you kill me, you would be as dirty
as I am?” “I am warning you, Cristanato!
Put your hands in the air! You’re under arrest!” “Better that I die!” I shouted as
I ran my way out of the holy place. I heard the panicking cries of the crowd
and the loud gun shot. No! It can’t be!
I felt the cold
metal break through my chest. My eyes widened and I stopped running. I looked
back to the man who shot me, to a man who is in authority to kill me. My
eyesight slowly becomes blurred. I felt my heartbeat fade and the world began
to spin. Truly, what is right, my Lord? I know I
deserve to be punished. But, am I the only one? How about the people like him
who use their name and authority just to say that they are pure and safe from your
judgment? What do you do with them, Lord?
Tears
trickled down my eyes and at my last breath, I managed to smile. I heard the
faintest sound of the police sirens and the ambulance, the screams of the
people, their blissfully painful screams of happiness. “Forgive
me, my Lord…” I whispered and fell on the cold gravel; drowning in my own
blood. And as I begin to lose consciousness, it came to my mind that while I
was busy here dying in regret for the sins I made, everyone was busy living in
the horror of having people like me existing in this world. But, really, what is right in this world?
Who resides in the wrongness society created?
How do we know that we are pure beings who are free from the curse of
sin?
Because if anything, we are all impure, all the same.
End. © 2016 Victor Makata
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Added on May 1, 2016 Last Updated on May 1, 2016 Tags: kalis ng kasalanan, church, holy grail, sin, crime, police, short story AuthorVictor MakataMetro Manila, National Capital Region, PhilippinesAbout| Filipino - English Writer who mainly focuses on giving emphasis to world immorality, hatred, poverty, crime, love and portrays the realistic view of a Filipino witnessing the downfall and the succes.. more..Writing
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