Less than Perfect

Story of my life?

My life is less than perfect.
It's been thrown into the harsh light
of Reality.
Whatever you thought,
whatever life you think I led..

My life is less than perfect.
There are days when I feel like giving up.
Days when tears are shed for hours.
Hours spent layng in bed.
You can think whatever but..

My life is less than perfect.
When you see that smile upon my lips,
are you sure it's real?
Or.. can you see that shade of sadness
in my eye.

I am less than pefect.
Somedays, I can't do a thing right.
Somedays, I can't stop crying..
Somedays, I just want to crawl into a hole
and disappear..

I am less than pefect.
Sometimes, I wear a feigned smile.
Sometimes the laugh you hear isn't genuine.
Have you every considered...

My life is less than perfect.
The harsh light of Reality reveals that.
When you see me break,
when you see me cry.

When my life seems perfect,
faery-tale like..
Think again.
For my life is less than perfect...

Reviews

[Sarah Jane]

Again, love this. the words are real and I can just hear the heartache. I like the way you write you feelings.

[vido.]

sad yet beautifully written. i feel a part of myself in that poem. lovely piece, well done.

[cfix]

Somedays, I can't do a thing right.
Somedays, I can't stop crying..
Somedays, I just want to crawl into a hole
and disappear..

Oh I so love these words, I so can feel this wonderful write. I enjoyed this sad write alot. I can feel the depth of it all.