The Thrill You Bring

The Thrill You Bring

A Poem by Elly
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This poem delves into the tension between desire and detachment, reflecting the conflict of craving connection while fearing attachment.

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"I like you a lot," a lie I won’t tell,

For your fragile heart, I know it too well.

So gentle, so pure, yet I crave your gaze,

Lurking in shadows, lost in this haze.


Like a phantom, I linger, watching you close,

Craving your essence, the thing I want most.

Your heart’s not my first, nor will it be my last,

For every connection fades into the past.


When feelings grow heavy, I turn away,

When the thrill is gone, I let it decay.

I don’t need a lover to anchor my night,

Just someone to answer, to spark, to ignite.


I don’t like you�"it’s the truth I conceal,

Yet I want you; it’s a hunger I feel.

You’re tender, no threat, like a lamb so still,

Yet your quiet allure bends me to your will.


You spark a fire that I cannot douse,

A raging tempest storming my house.

No chains to bind me, yet I’m caught in your air,

So simple, so plain, yet nothing compares.


You awaken a force I try to contain,

A wild desire coursing my veins.

I’ll shield you from harm; my will stays intact,

But this restless yearning keeps pulling me back.


You kill me so softly, yet still, I remain,

A slave to the longing, the pleasure, the pain.

Perhaps it’s not you, but the dream that you give,

A fleeting mirage, the reason I live.


But I won’t let you break me; I’ll rise in the end,

For I’m no beast�"just a girl who needs a friend.


23rd/11/2024

© 2024 Elly


Author's Note

Elly
What drives your desire? Is it the person, or the idea of them? Can longing be both an escape and a trap?

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Such a beautiful game of words... Love that hurts, love that you don't even want but yet crave so badly that you want to get consumed by it... I love those two last lines, "I'll rise in the end..." powerful phrase... amazing piece, thank you for sharing


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1 Month Ago

hi, yes that's exactly what the poem is saying you get the idea. I'm glad you like it. Please subscr.. read more

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Tags: #Desire, #Longing, #EmotionalConflict, #SelfDiscovery, #UnspokenLove, #Yearning, #InternalStruggle, #HeartacheT

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Hi there! I’m a poet who loves capturing emotions and turning them into words. My writing often explores themes of love, heartbreak, self-discovery, and healing, blending vulnerability with str.. more..

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