Finding me through him

"Finding Me Through Him" reflects self-discovery inspired by admiration, exploring growth and strength drawn from another's quiet confidence.

I dive deep into the unconscious mind,
Searching for a self I’ve yet to find.
A mirror of him, strong and whole,
Humble and brilliant, a quiet soul.

He stands tall, no need to boast,
A triple major, yet silent most.
Far he travels, yet always on time,
A discipline rare, almost divine.

I want to be like this man I admire,
His quiet confidence sets me on fire.
He breaks my limits, shatters my fears,
Guides me forward through unspoken years.

His eyes pierce through, steady and kind,
A comfort, a challenge to free my mind.
I crave his grace, his gentle way,
To live with purpose every day.

Though sugar and salt, we’re worlds apart,
I carry his lessons deep in my heart.
I’ll change my habits, break these chains,
Learn from his wisdom, embrace the gains.

One day, no longer a shadow to chase,
I’ll rise in my own authentic place.
No need to pretend, no need to strive,
I’ll simply be�"fully alive.

In becoming like him, I’ll discover me,
A reflection of all I was meant to be.
The female Jenny, strong and free,
The version of myself I was born to see.

1st/12/2024

Author's Note

This poem reflects the longing to embody qualities admired in someone else while uncovering one’s true self in the process. How do you relate to using someone’s example as a guide to becoming your best version?

Reviews

[Dave W.]

I like the phrase "Iron sharpens iron" that one person who helps you to become better and in turn you help them, great poem, I like it very much.