Part of Me

Part of Me

A Poem by Elliot Sparrow
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My first poem. Corny as hell, but you know who you are.

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A Part of Me.

Seven days is all I need
To see everything I need to see
Sit down, and drop a few days
Put them aside 
For you and me

I'm a freak
I'll always be
So I'll show you this weird Part of Me
Buried hopelessly in all my thought debris
My love ain't something you get for free

I'm many things:
Dark and mean
Angry and violent
Swearing and obscene
But I'm nothing without

You
Are many things:
Light against a black backdrop
A candle in the dark
But mostly you're just

A Part of Me.

© 2012 Elliot Sparrow


Author's Note

Elliot Sparrow
HAHAHA! I even tagged it as romance! This is my first poem EVER so don't be a jerk. Dedicated to Audible Gasp cause I'm quite the romantic. *holds random rose in mouth* Aggie: actually, you're more like the stupid bug about to be killed by fire. (No, I'm not the fire in this analogy. The fire is, metaphorically, a cat). But you're awesome anyways.

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Oh Mai Gawwwd. Why you gotta be such a jerk and make me cry all the time?

LolIol jk. They're happy tears. And the bug thing is true.

This is am epic poem for your first one. No bias here, I swear.

Hooooli shyyyyyt. This is freaking brilliant. :'D

Imma capture a screenshot of this and make it my wallpaper. And stalk you for the rest of your mortal life.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Elliot Sparrow

12 Years Ago

Well. Thanks, then. X)

;) please do. Stalk me, I mean.
:-)

12 Years Ago

Count on it.

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Added on November 13, 2012
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Decided on making an account here to try my hand at writing. Never have, before, though. Well, I mostly joined because of Audible Gasp. *gasp* OHEMJAY AGGIE, IT'S ME, ELLIOT!! *clears throat* An.. more..