The Land stone

The Land stone

A Poem by Unity Writes
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Inspired by the Land stone atop Beacon Hill.

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On the hilltop a standing stone compassed the land
with a golden clock cog generating the hand

Its white washed rock faces and soft cornering
cast out from the view all of its offerings

The purple from flowers lie calmly and soft
fed sunlight in times when the hand move across

And the water that stills on the tilt sided bows
release rivers of juice when its calendar flows

In the circle that middles the ticks and the stream
carves the shape of the sun as it filters the beam

In the shadow of blue where the moon makes its burst
it would stop at the crescent.                  and reverse 

On the hilltop a standing stone compassed the land
with a golden clock cog generating the hand

© 2016 Unity Writes


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Unity Writes
I hope you like it :)

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I really love he rhythm of it. Also how you make each stanza simple and still deliver a great message.

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This is gorgeous, the imagery is vivid and full of life. Lovely read. Starz x

Posted 7 Years Ago


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Unity Writes

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Hey Starzy, Many thanks for reading my work and for your kind words.
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You're very welcome, I enjoyed this piece

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Added on December 18, 2016
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Tags: land, stone, hill, story, poem, poetry, writer, writing, landscape, time, calendar

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Unity Writes
Unity Writes

Whitchurch, Hampshire, United Kingdom



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My name is Elliot James Burns and I am a 24 Year old male with a strong passion for imagination, writing and creativity. I always welcome the opportunity to talk and meet new people with the same .. more..

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