Red Riding Hood
A Book by Ellii Smith-Johnson
Forget the Carpenter that supposedly killed the Wolf, saved Red Riding Hood and her Grandma. Forget that stupid well in the front garden that only appeared when he needed it. This is the real story... 
© 2012 Ellii Smith-Johnson
Author's Note
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This is my first piece of writing that I've published here on WritersCafe and I'd love to hear what people think of it.
I often have problems with my punctuation and tend to put in too many commas and add far too many paragraphs. So, what do you think?
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Added on March 7, 2012
Last Updated on March 7, 2012
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Ellii Smith-JohnsonUnited Kingdom
About
Hey everyone!
I'm a British twelve year old with a passion for reading and writing.
I've been writing since I was about six, but the majority of what I've written has ended up in the bin.
I don't b.. more..
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